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Readers! I need your help

Hi everybody!

I hope you are all safe and healthy in this time. We are on day 4 of this lock-down and doing our bit to stay safe and help others to be safe as well. I’m not going to lie, I love to be home. I love the fact that I don’t have to be anywhere or required to be ‘ON’ the whole time.

But that is not why I need your help…

I need your help with a short story of about 1700 words that is just not working for me. I listened to an editor the other day and she referred to ‘meandering’ and ‘slight’ stories and both of these words seem applicable to this story.

That’s where your assistance come in. Please help me make my story better.

Here is the link.

  • This is a Google Doc
  • read through the story
  • If you have something to say or advise or question or anything that you feel will help me, select or right click where you want to say something, select comment and
  • type your message

That’s it from me for today. And I thank you in advance for your help.

Before you go, please subscribe to my letter by clicking the button just below the header of this post.

Peaceful day to you and stay safe until next time.